In which we feel accomplished...

[jesshartley]

Well, I think I have the first chapter of my first non-White Wolf book written. Those who expressed interest in helping with critique should be able to see it. If you did't, but do, write and let me know.

Comments

[justicar.livejournal.com]

Looks good...one minor issue of confusion in context early on where you refer to the girls mom as a good man. Other then that looks good.

[phantomoftruth.livejournal.com]

heya!

I have someone who called me asking for your contact info to speak with you about writing... when I get home tonight i'll pass you their im or email.

[jesshartley.livejournal.com]

Is that Juliet? I talked to her last night on line. :)

[artfemme.livejournal.com]

Yippe skippy! I'm so excited about this for you! Good job. OOh I can't wait to read this... :)
~R