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jesshartley ([personal profile] jesshartley) wrote2005-03-03 12:32 am

In which we feel accomplished...

Well, I think I have the first chapter of my first non-White Wolf book written. Those who expressed interest in helping with critique should be able to see it. If you did't, but do, write and let me know.

[identity profile] justicar.livejournal.com 2005-03-03 08:35 am (UTC)(link)
Looks good...one minor issue of confusion in context early on where you refer to the girls mom as a good man. Other then that looks good.

[identity profile] phantomoftruth.livejournal.com 2005-03-03 05:31 pm (UTC)(link)
heya!

I have someone who called me asking for your contact info to speak with you about writing... when I get home tonight i'll pass you their im or email.

[identity profile] artfemme.livejournal.com 2005-03-04 01:20 am (UTC)(link)
Yippe skippy! I'm so excited about this for you! Good job. OOh I can't wait to read this... :)
~R